Эссе по английскому языку на тему " Studying online is more interesting than studying at school"

Comment on the following statement. What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?

​​​Studying online is more interesting than studying at school

Write 200-250words

Use the following plan:

-make an introduction (state the problem paraphrasing the given statement),

-express your personal opinion and give 2-3 reasons for your opinion,

-express an opposing opinion and give 1-2 reasons for this opposing opinion,

-express why you do not agree with the opposing opinion,

-make a conclusion restating your position.

    Many people believe that distance learning is far more exciting than going to school. However, many others think that studying at school is better than studying online.
    From my point of view, distance learning is more beneficial. Firstly, it is more convenient – you do not need to wear uncomfortable uniform, you can eat whatever and whenever you want and you can take a break anytime. In addition, there is no need in direct contact with your teachers or classmates, so you can stay in comfort, relax and concentrate better.
    Nonetheless, many others insist that homeschooling is worse than school learning. Their argument is that attending school is the main way for a teenager to socialize. Also, they consider that when you study at home it is harder to concentrate and stay productive.
    I do not fully agree with my opponents. There are many ways for children and teenagers to socialize. For example, it could be some special courses or clubs like art schools or dancing classes. Hobbies are also good for socializing because you can meet people who share your interests. Furthermore, nowadays you can use many apps which can help you to be as concentrated and productive as possible.
    But it’s still up to you to decide whether you should go to school or study at home. For some people it is better to take online classes, while others prefer studying at school. As for me, I choose distance learning because it is more comfortable for me and I have enough time to study and entertain.