Эссе для ЕГЭ по английскому языку 2022-2023 (2)

Imagine that you are doing a project on how young people in Zetland travel.You have collected some data on the subject (see the line graph below).Comment on the data in the line graph and give your opinion on the subject of the project.

Line graph:

How do young people travel?

by air - 90 %
by train - 75 %
by  car - 20 %
by cruise liner - 15 %
by bus - 7%

Write 200-250 words.

Use the following plan: 

—make opening statement on the subject of the project;

—select and report 2-3 facts;

—make 1-2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;

—outline a problem that can arise with travelling and suggest a way of solving it;

—draw a conclusion giving your opinion on the importance of travelling in the life of young people.

   There is no secret that travelling plays an important role in people’s lives.For my project on how young people travel in Zetland I have found some data on this issue organised in the line graph.

   It is clear from the line graph that 90% of young people prefer travelling by air while travelling by bus is the least popular way of travelling with only 7% of teenagers doing it. Also, the category of travelling by train comes in the second place (75%)

  According to the results from the line graph, 20% of young people enjoy travelling by car that means 5% more than travelling on a cruise liner (15%). Also, travelling by car is almost three times more popular than travelling by bus (7%).

  While teenagers in Zetland can not imagine life without travelling one problem can arise connected with it. Young people often don’t have enough money to do on a journey. I think to solve this problem teenagers can save some money for trips having a part-time job. Thus, they can choose where and how to travel.

  In conclusion, I would like to say that travelling is a great idea to explore the world, open the mind and get a lot of positive emotions.