EDUCATION IS THE MOST VALUABLE THING FOR A TEENAGER. Эссе

СПб ГБПОУ «Санкт-Петербургский технический колледж управления и коммерции»

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Преподаватель: Ирина Владимировна Криницкая, преподаватель дисциплин ОДБ.03 Иностранный язык, ОНСЭ.03 Иностранный язык, ОГСЭ.03 Иностранный язык в профессиональной деятельности, ОП.08 Иностранный язык в сфере профессиональной коммуникации.

EDUCATION IS THE MOST VALUABLE THING FOR A TEENAGER. Эссе

Пояснительная записка.

Учебное задание: написать эссе с аргументами ЗА и ПРОТИВ.

Тема: Образование – самая большая ценность для подростка

Количество слов: 200 – 250

План: 

- вступление (обозначение проблемы);

- выражение личного мнения с 2-3 доводами собственной позиции;

- выражение противоположного мнения с 1-2 доводами противоположной позиции;

- объяснение, почему не согласны с противоположным мнением;

- заключение с повторным выражением собственного мнения.

Task: to write For-and-Against Essay

Theme: Education is the Most Valuable Thing for a Teenager

Words: 200 – 250

Plan:

- make an introduction (state the problem);

- express your personal opinion and gave 2-3 reasons of your opinion;

- express an opposing opinion and give 1-2 reasons for this opposing opinion;

- explain why you don’t agree with the opposing opinion;

- make a conclusion restating your position.

Выполнила студентка: ЛАПЧЕНКО ЕЛЕНА

Курс: 2

Группа: 9КМ-21

Специальность: 38.02.04 Коммерция

Полностью сохранена орфография автора.

Количество слов: 311

Nowadays, world gets faster and faster, but as faster it gets the more difficult things surround us. So world needs many qualified workers. But where can we get them? Even more, so fledgling teenager has to choose his profession and study hard. Some people think that it is the most valuable thing for teenager but others thing it is not. So who is right?

As for me, I believe that there are a lot of more valuable things than education. First of all, I mean relationships with parents. If parents will push on their kid and force him to study their connection will be lost forever. These hard years will pass but the wound will stay. Secondly, mental health is a fragile thing especially in that age and the rush to get the best education can ruin it. Thirdly, life is not a race. You can get education in every age. Maybe it is even more conscious way to get education.

However, there exists another point of view on this issue; some people think that education puts you on the right track. Teenager is not responsible for his decision to stop education but he can regret it in the future. Also teenagers can get in bad company if they have a lot of free time and spend it vainly.

Despite my respect for this opinion, I cannot share it. Firstly, you can regret every decision you make in teen age so it does not mean we must do not let them to take any decisions. Secondly, if a teenager has good relationship with parents he will never get with bad company.

In conclusion, I would like to say that the problem exists and there are different ways to solve it. But first off all we should give every human regardless of his age to rule his own life and be happy.

Сначала преподаватель только выделяет слова, словосочетания, в которых допущены ошибки – даёт возможность студенту самому обнаружить неточности. Затем обсуждаются нюансы, таким образом, проверка эссе носит поэтапный характер.

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